Monday, April 5, 2010

paper number three

so i am thinking about writing about Fleur i enjoyed this piece so much!!

i want to look at the text and see if i can prove that the storm was created by Fleur and that it was not just a random storm.

what do you think ????

7 comments:

  1. I really like your idea erika! i think if u can really analyze and show where your coming from u can do very very well with this paper! good luck!

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  2. Great Idea! I hadn't thought about writing about Fleur... even though it was the coolest story! LOL

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  3. Good idea. There are a ton of comparisons that you could make in that story to the storm.

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  4. Great idea! I think you will be able to come up with some good evidence. I can totally see that tornado being her revenge on the guys whom she worked with at the butcher shop. Especially since they are the ONLY people who died in the storm.

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  5. It's a good arguable thesis--excellent start. Now, be sure to think as well about why it's relevant. Why is it important that we realize that Fleur causes the storm? (There are several good answers to this question. I'm really interested to see what yours is.)

    :-)

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  6. I think that would be an interesting paper to read!

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